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Looking average so far

Please don't use sticks. Please. Sticks generally mean you have no drawing skills and can't animate. Your art isn't exactly brilliant, but it is better than stickmen. Its looking fairly interesting so far, but if its going to be any good you will need a lot of originality, because there's an awful lot of random zombie movies out there. A decent plot would help too. This is fairly hard to review on anything other than art and animation, so I guess I'll just do that. The artwork was pretty average on the whole, but the animation showed promise. So, yeah, with a good plot, good animation, good sound, good graphics and some big action sequences this could potentially do quite well. Also if this is an intro, then it doesn't really establish and characters or much of a plot or anything.

Bad points, but overall a good submission

There was quite a lot of good and bad with this. The drawings were pretty average, but still captured the Final Fantasy style. The animation fairly bad in places (the use of stretching pictures, the sudden appearance of the bad guy's minions etc.), yet the fight scenes were varied and exciting. The music was badly chopped together, yet added a brilliant atmosphere to the piece.

Overall I have to say your presentation needs a lot of work, but despite this, the flash was still very entertaining and you've obviously put a lot of time into it. I really enjoyed it, it was a lot better than the majority of Newgrounds submissions. Please practise your art and sound editing and you can make top quality submissions in the future

Colourful and smooth animation

Nice animation. Just one suggestion really; you could have made a better loop by having all the monsters at the end looking to their right then running off (away from the first monster). Good work though

Not brilliant, but still pretty good

To the guy who wrote the review before me; you've still got flash player 7, haven't you?

That was very well done, nice animation, good lip syncing and the voices fit well to the action. Yeah, the graphics weren't fantastic, especially the random backgrounds you used, but yeah, a pretty good start

Nicely put together music video

It looks like you put a lot of effort into that. The music matched up well to the action and didn't get too boring or repetative. Nice ending too. Well done

Very good short

You made that in 30 minutes? Thats amazing. Really high quality drawing and pretty good animation. Oh yeah, and also pretty funny to. Nice work!

Great animation, little plot

There wasn't really a story or anything but as a showcase for you animation skills it was brillliant. This movie contains some of the best animation I've seen for a long time on the portal. So yeah, if you can put in more story and humour into your next submission I think it'd do really well. The music fits well too.

Why no walking animations?

The animation was pretty good in places, so why didn't you make a walking animation for the characters? It would have improved the quality quite a bit. Overall it was pretty good; the artwork wasn't that great but the sound quality and the rest of the animation was fairly good

Very nice

This was pretty good, well written, good characters and funny as well. You just need to work on you graphics and animation a bit (try using more suttle gradients for fills for example, and as the guy before me said work on the lip syncing - it takes ages but it makes the whole animation look loads better). Looking forward to more!

Dark, disturbing and well put together

Well, the artwork wasn't up to much but you were very creative with the shots and the scenes you used. Overall a dark and disturbing animation that fit the song well. The sound was a bit low on quality, but I know its a difficult balance between that and huge submissions. So yeah, graphics were the only thing really letting you down on this, work on them and you can make even higher quality submissions. Good work!

thornebush5 responds:

Thank you. The graphics could be a little smoother I'll admit but I like the story book type feel they have.

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