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Not enough and FAR too simple

This is incredibly simplistic stuff. That's not a bad thing in itself, but if you can understand your descriptions of how to make one, you probably already know how to make a movie clip. Some examples of uses of movie clips would have helped (e.g. treating it as a graphic and setting the frame to have, for example, an eye blinking at frame 10 that is all in one movie clip)

IceyDrummer responds:

yes i no it was simplistic but as i found when doing tutorials myself as in reading them if they get too far ahead too fast then people usally just close it but if u put it as simple as possible and go step by step the steps that you think no1 would need then peopole don't get as overwelmed... so that was what i was trying to do here, but that is a good example and i might use it and credit you i guess

Loved it

That was brilliant, nice introduction and a fun, simple game.
Happy Christmas!

good work

More colours (there was a lack of, say, browns), some other effects (like the spray paint effect from MS Paint), changable background, options for hiding the colour palet (for screenshots) and maybe an eraser. Otherwise a good submission

Good but same-y

Nice graphics and reasonably original, but got boring quite quickly. I'd like to see some more variation in the game, like different themed levels. Also the perspective didn't quite work. Not a bad submission though

A good test but work to be done

It was good for a test, but there's still several problems I came across. You couldn't leave the instructions screen for one, and nothing happened when you died (like a restart).

Didn't seem to work fully

I had some problems playing this, first of all Ralph gave his 'looks like I failed to convince him' line while saying other stuff when Avery walked in, and then it wouldn't load the next part after I took the case. I'm not sure if this was meant to be spoof-like, the dialogue was either very funny or incredibly cheesy, and the drawing was a bit basic but I liked the style. Maybe a button to skip text. It's a bit hard to review when I've only seen the first section, but if the problem is just me then it looks like you have a pretty solid game here. I'd like to see more

Pretty good

This was well made and put together, and an interesting test for Newgrounds enthusiasts. I liked it though there was the odd mistake - I don't think 'featre' is spelt like that, and according to the Newgrounds history page Tom Fulp was unable to get Newground as his website (as you seemed to suggest Newgrounds was originally) because it was already taken.
A few suggestions if you were to make a sequal - maybe add more interactivity for example giving users the option to change the style or music. Also why not pick a random 20 questions from a much larger batch, that would improve replayability. I'm not too sure about having a score and lives, why not get rid of the lives and do something like lose points for incorrect answers? But these are just suggestions and you submission is still very good

ELFERRETO responds:

thanks for the great review! i will certainly look into those suggestions

Well executed but very difficult

The game looks very good and plays well, though it is very hard on single-player mode. The computer controlled spider seems to have a greater reach than you do, and once he starts moving that seemed to be the end for me. The most hits I've been able to get in is about 5 before I get slaughtered. Maybe I'm missing something. The two player option is a good idea though.

Nice simple and effective game

This is a well put together flash game, though lack the guy before's idea of music in-between levels is a good one. Not sure about the levels really, my average time dropped from 0.256 to 0.221 seconds, not enough of a change to make any difference to the level I got to. Still the scoring makes up. Not a game to get adicted to though...
(My score was 12275)

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