One-Dollar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Clay House Episode03]

Very good

This could well be the best of the three so far. There's not a great deal of plot, but the action sequences are brilliant. Hope to see more of your work

Phill64 responds:

Thanks alot! practice makes perfect hey! and thanks for following my episodes. It was my intention to make this one more action than story but i will try to improve my plots :)

[Animal Crossing]

Liked that

That was really good, nice drawing and animation, and also pretty funny. It fit in well with the Animal Crossing style. Where would RPGs be without the wierd characters?

SlouchMD responds:

Thanks! And yeah, I absolutely *love* the character designs for that game.

[ASDA :The animated series]

Good one

Nice work. You need to work on your overall voice acting and sound quality, and prehaps cut down on the lengthy musical traveling scenes, but all in all a pretty solid submission. Look forward to seeing more.

jonthedoors2006 responds:

The travelling scenes are supposed to be long, because our shop is absolutly massive. Thats what it's digging at. More of a joke among my 'off computer' freinds

[Behind the scenes : Mario]

OK to Not-bad

You can't be a decent Flash artist if you do homework!

Seriously though, not a bad effort, but needs improving in the whole 'look' (not all of the sprites align, or are of different sizes). Some not bad ideas too

GDAB responds:

The good news is that I only have 2 more years of Home work.
And I'll be sure to make sure that the sprites aline!
Thanks for the advice and the vote.